User:Sunflowerroad/Siegrid Alnoy/FilmIsGreat Peer Review

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 * Sunflowerroad
 * Siegrid Alnoy

Hi Sunflowerroad,

I think you did a good job. You just had some small mistakes (for example, putting "one" instead of "won" in the lead). You also accidentally put her years of schooling from 1898-1990... which is 92 years. I'm not sure what you intended to put but you should probably fix that as soon as possible. Some things I would suggest is adding the english titles of the french films in the lead as well, So: Elle est des Nôtres (She's One of Us). I would also change your "Works" heading to "Filmography". The content you added was relevant to the topic and it had a neutral tone of voice. You did a good job with finding reliable sources and making the article organized and easy to follow. FilmIsGreat (talk) 03:46, 5 November 2019 (UTC)