User:Sunggyunglee/Metabolic flux analysis/Gnurwono Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sunggyunglee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunggyunglee/Metabolic_flux_analysis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Metabolic flux analysis

Lead

 * does not bring up the different methods to be talked about, need better connection between lead and main sections of the article


 * lead mentions NMR but is not brought up in the rest of the article
 * lead is concise and is a good introduction to the article

Content

 * content is relevant and up to date
 * could use an example of application of one of the methods - what can be accomplished with these methods?

Tone and Balance

 * content is neutral and seems unbiased

Sources and References

 * some repeat in authors for sources
 * some sources are repeated
 * good use of secondary sources

Organization

 * content is well organized and well written, no comments here

Images & Media

 * good caption on image
 * maybe include images for other section

Overall Impressions

 * article is definitely more complete and thorough
 * strengths: clear organization, clarity of information
 * improve: introduction better connected to article