User:Sunnyboba/Webtoon (platform)/Strikebeast Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sunnyboba


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sunnyboba/Webtoon (platform) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Webtoon - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content about relevance of Coins to Webtoons is highly relevant to the article (about Webtoon). It adds supplemental information the usage of coins on the Webtoon platform (which currently is absent), including how and why coins are used on the platform. The information is recent, and there doesn’t seem to be any missing content, and is properly backed by sources.

The tone of the coins segment is neutral, since it only states facts about the usage of coins. The sources seem reliable as well. However, there are some minor issues of typing - for instance, the Iphone operating system is commonly referred to as iOS instead of IOS. Otherwise, it reads really well.