User:Sunnycxz/Gender inequality/Saronogd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sunnycxz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunnycxz/Gender_inequality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Poverty in Vietnam

Evaluate the drafted changes
The section of the article that you decided to add a picture to mainly discusses how females do not like to reveal their intelligence to their (male) partners out of fear that it will make their male partner less interested in them. The main focus is how women view discussing IQ in relationships vs how men view it. The picture that you uploaded shows a woman hugging her boyfriend which does not exemplify what the article is discussing. Seeing that the man is not hugging the woman back, the picture may fit better with an article that discusses how men express emotion or show affection to their partners vs how women do. If there is a section in the article that discusses this you should move the picture there.