User:Sunnysideup373/sandbox

Article Evaluation
This evaluation will examine the Wikipedia page on Interpersonal communication.

Content
The first thing that stands out is that the introduction is extremely long. The writing itself could be more concise, and various information could be sorted into one of the sections of the article. In the Technology and Interpersonal Communication skills section, the citation is improperly placed at the very end of the section, rather than linked to the References section at the very bottom of the article. Although not extremely distracting, it is very clearly in the wrong area of the page.

Tone
The article seems to do a great job of staying neutral. However, this is not too hard as it is a page that generally just covers a wide range of theories explored in interpersonal communication.

Talk Page
There are no conversations, however, it has been rated three times by three different WikiProjects: Linguistics, Sociology, and Psychology. All have given it a C-Class rating. One thing to note is that this page seems to have been a student's assignment for a class at Brock University, which could have been the source for much of the information written in the article. The conversations on the page seem to have been very active up until 2014, and many complain about the citations, and the lack of diagrams (which are generally plentiful in communication studies). Scrolling through the Talk page actually shows that the page was created by students in nursing school, which could explain why people from other disciplines had so many issues with the quality of the page.

Topics for Editing
The following are the three pages I will possibly be making edits to/contributing to for my COM 418 Project.

Adriatic Campaign of World War I
This article is marked under cleanup for the WikiProject Military History. It tries to link to many Wikipedia articles that do not currently exist, which can be a bit distracting. The Talk page notes a few events that need to be added to.

Battles of the Isonzo
There are five Battles of the Isonzo listed on the Military History page as Open Tasks under Expansion Needed: Third, Fifth, Seventh, Ninth, and Tenth. All have been listed as Start Class, and I have enough background information on each to be able to expand on any of them.

Third Battle of the Isonzo Draft
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