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Article review
As a fan of all forms of metal and hardcore, I frequently visited Wikipedia pages to find information on new bands that I was discovering daily. I quickly became a fan of a genre known as deathcore and even formed my own band. One of my greatest influences was and still is Oceano. However, when I visited their Wikipedia page, I found three aspects of it worth commenting on: dead links, bias of the sources, and information was left out in the band's history portion of the page.

Dead links
The references are cleanly laid out at the bottom of the page and are easy to follow. However, when I went to check the source that claimed that Oceano's album Contagion had landed on the Independent Albums chart, the link contained a blank screen with no information on where the band had charted. I then looked further into the site and clicked on the band's biography the site had listed, only to find a "Page Not Found" screen coming up next.

Bias of the sources
I looked at the sources of the page to make sure the citations were accurate to the information presented. When reading these, the language of some of these sources seemed to be of a financial viewpoint, playing on the band's then current dilemma of going on a hiatus to seemingly make the reader consider going to a festival that Oceano was playing at.

Information on the page
In the history section of Oceano's page, nothing is written is about the band's activities after they signed to Sumerian Records, even though it is revealed in the discography section of the page that they released their first album with Sumerian Records, which is called Revelation. There should be something written about the release of the album for the page to be as up to date as possible, and for the page to be a more comprehensive work.

Summary
In conclusion, the Oceano band page is okay, with a fair amount of the band's history being present as a positive to the page. The page falls short on the recent album news, which can limit information that can benefit a reader. The page also struggles with the bias of some citations, and for dead links relating to where the band's records have charted. I would like to improve this band's page, so I made a comment on the talk page that suggests that the information on Revelation (their most recent album) is put into the history portion of the page to make the section as up to date as possible.