User:Sunshine8899/Structural chemistry/Icocci Peer Review

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Sunshine8899
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 * User:Sunshine8899/Structural chemistry
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 * Structural chemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead does a good job of summarizing the field of structural chemistry and its goals. You may need to include a citation for the main tasks of structural chemistry. I would chance the first sentence to say "...part of chemistry that deals with..." Also what is the difference between understanding the spatial structures of molecules and those of solids?

Content

Content is diverse and relates back to the lead. I think you can cut out the paragraph under determination methods (since you proceed to list the determination methods by state after - it seems redundant). Good depth of information and nice use of images for determination methods.

Tone and Balance

Article is well-balanced.

Sources and References

References missing for the contributions, challenges, and future directions sections. You have linked to a page for SHARPER that does not exist. References are otherwise comprehensive, and links are functional. Article is otherwise well organized and sections support a good understanding of structural chemistry.

Organization

Maybe try to align the text better so that images do not spill into unrelated sections. Do challenges and future directions fall under importance and contributions of structural chemistry?

Images and Media

Good images. All have captions. It may be nice to include images for determination methods other than solid state.

Overall Impressions

Overall, the article is comprehensive and provides the reader a broad understanding of structural chemistry. References are missing for some sections. It may be nice to include more images. A very good start.