User:Supinecolt44422/Pigeon Mountain salamander/GreenJadeNeocaridina Peer Review

General info
Supinecolt44422
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Supinecolt44422/Pigeon Mountain salamander
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pigeon Mountain salamander

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, your additions are very well done. They provide a breadth of new information on your topic. I especially appreciate the inclusion of the "Threats to Extinction" and the "Recovery Plan" sections. These flow well from one to the next. You did a good job writing in the Wiki style and remaining unbiased in your wording. The only thing that was unclear to me was "SVL" in the physical description section. Perhaps this is well-known in the field, but it may not be common knowledge. I think the main area for improvement with this draft is in the citations. With it being such a rare species, I am sure publications on this exact species are rare. However, there may be papers on other salamander species of conservation concern that could be applied to this species. The last thing that could really tie this page together is connecting it to other pages. A connection to Chytrid may be especially useful for people who are unfamiliar with the fungus. All in all, this is a really strong draft, good luck going forward!