User:Surfer616147/2001 southern Peru earthquake/Rjones222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The 2001 southern Peru earthquake


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Surfer616147/2001_southern_Peru_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

2001 southern Peru earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
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For the 2001 southern Peru earthquake groups article I believe it right now has a very basic overview of the events that happened but there is definitely more the group can dive into. Additionally, I would add more information about the tsunami the earthquake caused and the damage that did. The information the group has in the sandbox looks spot on and has a lot of in depth detail about the tsunami and plenty of additional references. Also, I would add more maps, graphs, and pictures to help show the relationship of the events and the tectonic plates, along with the location. But, the extensive amount of additional sources your group has gathered is very beneficial and should allow the reader to find more information.

Andrew Response:
I agree that there is more that can be added to the article itself. The references were simply gathered for brainstorming ideas so they are incomplete/not sorted as of yet. I also think that adding more information regarding how this specific tsunami occurred mathematically might be a good idea. Although, I will probably simplify the mathematical expressions in order to not overwhelm the average reader AND prevent an imbalance for the article itself as it is an article about the earthquake and the tsunami that resulted not the tsunami itself.