User:Sustainable101/Sustainable public bus transport in Barcelona/Gabriellearace Peer Review

General info
Sustainable101
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sustainable101/Sustainable public bus transport in Barcelona
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Sustainable101/Sustainable public bus transport in Barcelona

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the article remains very relevant to the topic. I like how it starts off by just explaining where Barcelona is, as well as how populated it is. All of the different sections: about Barcelona and their buses, timeline and transition from diesel to electric, shaping public perception of transportation, and economic considerations and environmental impacts are in a great order as well. However, I would consider changing the titles of the different sections. "About Barcelona and their buses" doesn't sound very formal. Nothing distracted me while I was reading, I felt that it was very easy to follow along. Something I would consider adding is a section about the price of public transportation, maybe even compare it to the price of other forms of transportation. All of the links worked for me and it definitely seems like the sources support the claims in the article. Is it possible to keep the first two sources as just one source since they are the same? I would consider making this change if it is possible rather than noting the same reference twice. An interesting section you could also add would be how Covid impacted public transportation. Overall, the article looks great and is very informative. It was very easy to follow along and understand each of the points that were being made.