User:Sustainavaleity/Leaching (metallurgy)/Alohr77 Peer Review

General info
Sustainavaleity
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sustainavaleity/Leaching (metallurgy)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leaching (metallurgy)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article draft does a good job added to history of Leaching. The additions are neutral and strictly factual. The additions do a good job linking to other important Wikipedia articles. Again, the "History" additions are well thought out and detailed. The added reference appears to be credible and linked. The formatting of this section is appropriate as well.

To suggest some changes, when adding to the history section make sure to cite the source at the end of the sentence. This makes it easier to understand where the exact information is coming from. Is there any additional history that is relevant after the 16th century or does it become an outdated process?

Are there any other sections you could add to the article such as any popular or famous uses of this technique within recent or late history other than what is presented? An interesting addition would be adding a visual to the article to help readers understand the process or get a visual understanding as well. Also, to improve the article I would definitely expand or add other sections of information outside of just history. When looking at the reference or source sections, I would consider finding literature or books on the subject as well to ensure a wider range of views/ perspectives. Is this process used in conjunction with any other common metallurgical processes? Are there any techniques used to guard against the potential release of toxins or effective waste disposal techniques when applying this process?

The history section does a good job staying in chronological order as the information is presented. I will definitely focus on improving my application of this formatting to my article as well.


 * Thank you so much for your detailed input. It genuinely has helped me a lot. Best of luck to you and I'll do my best to incorporate what I can! --Sustainavaleity (talk) 16:38, 5 April 2024 (UTC)