User:Suzetter8/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Animal shelter (Provide a link to the article here.)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

This article matters because animal shelters have deeper sides that some people may not know about. My first impressions on this article was that I thought it sounded like a text message. The language used should've been more formal, since they're talking about an important topic.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

This article was not well written. It sounds like it was written in a hurry, almost like a text message. It also needs stronger word choice, throughout the whole piece the headings were not worded to there best potential. The headings were a bit boring.