User:SuzySchaffer/Gay affirmative psychotherapy/Joshtillmord Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? SuzySchaffer
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:SuzySchaffer/sandbox

Content being evaluated
One of the emerging areas of research regarding gay affirmative psychotherapy is related to the process of assisting LGBTQ individuals from religious backgrounds feel comfortable with their sexual and gender orientation. Narrative analyses of clinicians' reports regarding gay affirmative psychotherapy suggest that the majority of conflicts discussed within the therapeutic context by gay men and their relatives from religious backgrounds are related to the interaction between family, self, and religion. Clinicians report that gay men and their families struggle more frequently with the institution, community, and practices of religion rather than directly with God. Chana Etengoff and Colette Daiute report in the Journal of Homosexuality that clinicians most frequently address these tensions by emphasizing the mediational strategies of increasing self-awareness, seeking secular support (e.g., PFLAG), and increasing positive communication between family members.

Evaluation
I see that you are adding a research component to this page, awesome! One note is just to make sure you have some sources, and to make sure those sources are more than single studies. Additionally, from what I know of affirmative CBT, part of it is also affirming the journey opposed to the orientation itself.

Another consideration might be to add a snippet about kids/families. Is there any research on affirmative CBT with kids or families or does that still need to be developed?

Great work so far! I learned a lot!