User:Svanla/Shih Tzu/Jacksondk3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Svanla


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Svanla/Shih_Tzu?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shih Tzu

Evaluate the drafted changes
Svanla chosen article is filled to the brim with information that seemed really hard to pinpoint a good edit, but Svanla managed to do so. Svanla highlighted the edits in description and health for example and adding a whole new heading like breeding which I didn't see in the original wiki article. Also Svanla has tons of references as well that you can click on and go start to the source. So far it seemed like a good start in the right direction. Still need to work on a lead but otherwise Svanla's doing a great good.