User:Svg1901/Welfare reform/Mayaavela Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Savannah's article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Svg1901/Welfare_reform?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Savannah! Overall, great job on your edits of this article. Everything in the article was relevant to the topic you chose. I would add a lead sentence to introduce the topic of how the information you provided is related to welfare reform. The article was also neutrally written with great viewpoints that landed just right.

Your citation links work and all seem to support the claims that you made in the article. Additionally, each fact was supported by an appropriate reliable reference. No information seemed out of date.

One sentence that confused me was "According to the Interim Regulations a "work-eligible individual" is not someone who: is a parent that is a minor and not head of household, a foreign national that is not eligible for assistance, is under a Tribal TANF program, and on a case-by-case option those receiving Supplemental Security Income." I think the way this was worded threw me off so I would go over this and see if there is a way to make this more concise. Overall, great job. -Maya