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Article Evaluation

The article I evaluated was the article Collectivization in the Soviet Union. All of the information in the article was relevant to the topic and there weren't any distractions in the article. The article was very neutral and informational with no biased frames towards a position. There were not any viewpoints that were either over or under represented. There were a few links that did not work but the links that did work were from reputable primary sources with no bias. There are some citations needed in the article, and the Talk page does not have any conversations however there are a few comments that offer some possible clarifications or corrections. ~

Notes on Improving Existing Article – Evacuations in the Soviet Union

This article is lacking a lot of fundamental information. Such as how the evacuation impacted not only the industry but also how it impacted the people who were being evacuated and where they went. I also think it could use some history about why they were evacuated and where the industry and people ended up. ~