User:Svn38/Security breach notification laws/Fsharbi Peer Review

In this article, we learn security breach notification laws in terms of state legislature. The lead section specifically explains the topic with of focus on the United States. However, without providing any additional information, next, we see the list of the countries examined one by one under each title. So, it seems to me there is a discrepancy between the lead section and the body of the article. There should be one more paragraph in the lead section, probably the last one, which would (a) compare the US example with the international understanding and, then, (b) provide some information about the international understanding of “breach notification laws.”

Another critical point worth mentioning is the example of China. It would be very important to provide more information for this country because it is one of the most important example that a reader might want to focus and learn about together with the US. However, I only learn when China adopted laws with a short sentence. Please provide more information regarding amendments, if any, digital service notification requirements, maybe penal sanctions, and their way of practicing the security breach notification laws. I know that it might be difficult to find information from the direct governmental sources for this example, but I am sure that you can find some studies and reports providing some sort of explanations that can highlight the Chinese interpretation and implementation of these laws.

I really think that the “impact section” is a very important part of this article. In this part, the author explains data breach notification laws in terms of (a) crime impact, (b) economic impact, and (c) victim response. I recommend considering two more aspects though: (a) international impact and (b) political impact. The first can include how international law can explain the concept together with some examples from the International Court of Justice (ICJ), if possible. The latter can include some information about the political consequences of the security breach notification laws. In most countries mentioned in the article, these laws were enacted after 2015; however, for the US example, it is 2002. So, I really think that you can find many relevant sources mentioning how these laws impacted the American political environment.

Thank you!

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