User:Sweepsweepmop/Greek Drachma/BarbequeWater Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sweepsweepmop


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sweepsweepmop/Greek_Drachma?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Greek drachma

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead Section

No changes were made to the lead, nor do I think any are needed.

Clarity of Article Structure

The order of the sections is great. The added section names makes the article more appealing to the eye rather than just being a wall of text. The section names, however, should only have the first word capitalized rather than every word.

Coverage Balance

The coverage balance is fantastic. With the addition of the section names in the ancient drachma section, it really balances out the previously overloaded section. I didn't feel as though there was any view points being pushed on me.

Content Neutrality

The article seems neutral to me. It might just be my untrained eye's fault, but nothing seemed biased.

Sources

The sources look good. Not all of them have been added as citations yet, but you have clearly noted where those spots are. The sources are all being pulled from the same articles and nothing seems unsourced.

Overall Impressions

Overall, everything looks great. The section names added all help the article in a major way. Your added section has a lot of good information and looks like its only going to get more if you are able to fulfill the plans noted in the draft. Great work and good luck finding the stuff you're looking for.