User:SweetJonesN/Lakota mythology/Maeloves Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SweetJonesN


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SweetJonesN/Lakota mythology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lakota mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The bibliography looks well drafted and well composed, the links look impressive and well versed. The article is well written and provides a good idea of what I am about to read, try adding in some more insight onto the topic, if you can find a way to really grab the readers attention this would help as well. Overall this is a great first draft and I would very much like to read the full article.