User:Swiftluvr222/Feminism in Argentina/HJKwiki12345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jacquelinesqui19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jacquelinesqui19/Feminism_in_Argentina?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminism in Argentina

Lead

 * As far as I'm aware, you haven't specified if things will go in the lead, but you certainly have something that could if you wanted to. Your first sentence sounds like something that belongs in the Lead.

Content

 * I would have to say that the new stuff is relevant, even if it isn't mentioned in the article at this time. To me that shows a clear need that your new material will address.

Ton and Balance

 * You sound very neutral here and I really couldn't find any instances where you were glaringly biased

Sources and References

 * You only cite one source, which may be enough, but I think you could have more. That being said I understand how hard it is to find sources. I suggest checking the Kresge Library for stuff, you never know.

Organization

 * You told me that you haven't exactly decided where everything is going to end up in the article, but other than that, things were well organized and there weren't any instances where things were jumbled or seemingly out of order.

Final Thoughts

 * Your work is exactly what you want from a wikipedia article, it stays away from the emotion and sensationalism of many forms of writing. That is to say that it is perfectly mundane, in the best possible way. I'm here to read about a subject, not be convinced of something. With that in mind you achieved your goals here, well done.