User:Swifty4life1989/Abortion law/Winchester3324 Peer Review

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Swifty4life1989
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Swifty4life1989/Abortion law
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Abortion law

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft does a great job on explaining the background of trigger laws in relation to abortion and how the states took advantage of the decision that struck down Roe v. Wade. I also like how you discussed how things like birth control and Plan B were shown as potential abortifacient. To be honest I wouldn't change anything that you're doing, but I would make sure you don't change the way you're writing. I like how you go through and individually explain how each item could become something that is not allowed. I also enjoy how you explain the Dobbs case decision, so people don't have to go somewhere else to see what you're talking about. Your sources look good, and your structure looks great as well.