User:Swifty4life1989/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Gender studies

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this topic because I am interested in gender studies and learning the difference between the genders.

Evaluate the article
This article is about gender studies. Gender usually refers to the social and cultural parts of masculinity and femininity. The article starts out with a very strong lead section which draws the audience in. This article is written in a bias way toward the female side of gender studies. There should be more focus on the male side of gender studies as well. This takes away some credibility the article had, because there is so much focus on one gender, not the other. The tone of this article is written in a neutral way with many fact based statements. There are many sources throughout this article, which helps keep it fact based and unbiased. There is one image used in this article, but it doesn't enhance or take away from the article in any way. My overall impression of the article was not great, it should have been more neutral. The facts were good, but they were only relevant for one side of gender studies. This article should be rewritten to a neutral point of view with equal focus on female and male gender studies.