User:Swimbioexercise123/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
RMS Lusitania

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article became I love Naval History and I had to write a paper last semester about submarine use during WWI. The sinking of Lusitania was a focal point in history because it was the first passenger ship sunk during WWI. The sinking of the Lusitania was also the first incidents of American citizens being killed during WWI.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

This article was very well put together and had a very neutral tone. It is divided up nicely to give an accurate and detailed description of the Lusitania. This article is apart of many Wiki-projects such including Germany, ships, military history, and shipwrecks. This article needs some more citation and needs to work on the wording in some sections. In one section called conspiracy theories, it contains evidence of the theories and contradicts itself. Overall this is a very good article that just need a little work.