User:SwitchTilt

=Needs Improvement Articles=

Hammer Article
 * Lead description gives extraneous details
 * Sections need expansion
 * Lists throughout the text are lengthy and only some sections have a description
 * An image section at the end highlights only a few types of hammers which makes it seem like the earlier lists could be reduced
 * It would make more sense for the flow of the article to have the types of hammers sections and images near each other since they contain related information

Popular Culture Article
 * Strays from Wikipedia's neutral point of view value
 * May contain original research
 * Information in the "History and Definitions" section seems choppy because of so many short paragraphs. It may help to separate this into a history section and a definitions section instead of keeping them combined
 * Sections at the end need expansion and clarity as to why they are involved in popular culture

=Choosing Articles to Work on=
 * 1) Corset controversy
 * 2) Crêpe
 * 3) Forestry law

=Assigned Articles for Improvement=

=Corset Controversy= Problems Tasks
 * Very Lengthy
 * Extensive quotes
 * Switches between supporters' and detractors' arguments without a concise statement of their main points
 * Establish the purpose of the article
 * Some of the article is dedicated to the controversy while some is more focused on corset wearing culture
 * Decipher the main points for each section
 * This is contained in the quotes and not concisely stated
 * Establish the most effective layout for the readers’ understanding of the information
 * Determine the best way to reduce the length of the article by reducing quoted material
 * Determine if the quote is essential to the article
 * Determine which section of quotes should remain direct quotes and which sections can be eliminated or paraphrased
 * Determine which quotes as a whole can be summarized

=Crepe= Problems Tasks
 * Additional citations needed (tagged)
 * Not reflective of an encyclopedic tone (tagged)
 * Organization of ideas within main sections
 * Sort through the ideas presented in each section of the text
 * Reorganize those ideas so that they are more user friendly
 * Adjust tone when needed
 * Verify talk page and sources (talk page has highlighted areas of the content which contradict information in the article)
 * Verify that the article is self-contained and does not rely on links