User:Sxndrx2828/Psychology/18roo Peer Review

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Sxndrx2828
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 * User:Sxndrx2828/Psychology
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel the overall tone of the article seemed to be neutral and I like how the information seemed to be on topic; however, I think it would have more impact for the reader if the authors included pictures to add a little pop of color and show what is being talked about. I appreciate the organization showing where the lead, body, and references are, but it would have made the article stand out more if the sections were nicely labeled. The article seems to contain accurate information regarding the topic helping the reader learn more about psychology. I also can not seem to access all of the references posted at the bottom. Overall I feel the article is strong but could be more impactful with a few touches, but I think they did a great job!