User:Sxndrx2828/Psychology/AstroWiki143 Peer Review

General info
Sxndrx2828
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sxndrx2828/Psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychology:

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm not sure about the first part of the sandbox article, so my review will start from where it says "== Article Draft ==Etymology and definitions" and will work my way down the article.

Lead

 * Sources and citations needed
 * Second paragraph should flow better, right now it just reads as disjointed facts.
 * Non-humans should be included still as psychology also pertains to animals

Article Body

 * I don't know if this section is currently just a catch-all that will later be organized into different sub-headings or not, but the way it currently stands is a bit confusing
 * It goes from etymology/definition, to history, to what psychology is and the different places that it can be utilized
 * Separate sub-headings could prove to be useful in the organization of the article
 * The last sentence can possible be removed. Either that or examples of jobs should be included in the previous sentences as well.
 * Sources/citations needed

Overall, I think the article is a great start! With a few tweaks to help with flow and to flesh it out a bit more, and with the addition of citations and images, it will be a more well-rounded article.