User:Sy2520/Texting while driving/Tsoppe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? sy2520 &  Oliviamorton

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sy2520/Texting while driving/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Texting while driving
 * Evaluate the drafted changes

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

They added two references according to their bibliography to insert more information concerning texting and driving. Overall, it has a good lead in which define what texting and driving is while providing back ground information. However, there wasn't enough added for me to add more comments or suggestions.