User:Sydanne7/Meditation/Marleywdunn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydanne7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sydanne7/Meditation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Meditation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your edits so far add well-sourced details to the article for sure! I would suggest rewording the second sentence for clarity, possibly: "Mindfulness meditation is not a treatment for insomnia patients, but it can provide support in addition to their treatment options."

I also agree that removing the detail about richard davidson helps the article by getting rid of an unsupported, possibly biased account. I would suggest possibly finding another source that is more reliable to replace that deletion if you can!

Another section I think you could add to in the article is the psychotherapy section! I'm sure there's more resources that have information on applications of meditation in psychotherapy. I also think it would add to the article to cite some research on the effects of meditation for chronic pain sufferers as I've heard a bunch of research is being done/has been done on that topic. That would tie in with you insomnia information as another clinical application.

Overall, great work so far!