User:Sydmarks/Human flea/Adam.PerrettGCSU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adam.PerrettGCSU


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sydmarks/Human flea


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human flea

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Phylogeny and Distribution

 * Change ",this single host" to ",this original host"
 * I would probably get rid of the citations if you use them more than once in a row --> If they are there for a reason, then forget I said anything.
 * Everything else looks well put together