User:SydneyPeskovitz/Nymph (biology)/Ms1904 Peer Review

General info
Me: Ms1904
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Editing: SydneyPeskovitz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:SydneyPeskovitz/Nymph (biology)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nymph (biology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great start so far! I saw a grammar mistake towards the end you wrote "to reach their adults form" and I think you meant to say " to reach their adult form." Other than the grammar I would also recommend adding more citations and sources into your text so that everything you say is supported and the reader can check the source of the information easily. I also think you could expand on the section under "relationship with humans." you could talk about if the insects pose any threats to crops or if they have any historical/medical significance. Finally, as you keep working on your draft you might want to take notes under each source you add to your bibliography to quickly write what its about and what you took from it so that you can keep track of everything. Other than expanding on the text, adding citations, and fixing the small grammar issues, I think your draft looks great and you're off to a great start! Good Job! Ms1904 (talk) 03:39, 12 March 2024 (UTC)