User:Sydneyd75/Family resilience/Assumption25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? SydneyD75

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Sydneyd75/Family resilience
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Family resilience
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Family resilience

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like how within your first edit you added another program to the paragraph to offer another point of view. The content added to the paragraph relates to the topic, is up to date, and has a new source added to back up the information. The second edit also adds more content that is relevant to the topic, and comes from the same new source you created which is convenient. I also like how in your second edit you added more content relating to the effect that disability has on the whole family. Neutral content is added that relates to the topic.

Sydney: Thank you for the review!