User:Sydneyd75/Family resilience/Kathleenmoran2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydneyd75


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sydneyd75/Family_resilience?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Family resilience

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sydney did a great job added more to the military subsection. She added one more program called FOCUS where the reader can learn more about another family reliance program around the topic of military families struggling with children who have disabilities. I had no idea about any of these programs and never really thought about families in the military so it was very interesting!

I really like the additions to "Family resilience prevention and intervention" and how you talked about how disabilities affect the whole family. It is especially good because we talked a lot about this in class. I would add a little more information here maybe some evidential examples found in peer reviewed articles!

Sydney: Thank you Kathleen, I added more information from a third peer reviewed article!