User:Sydneyrobinson/Figure skating at the Olympic Games/GiancarloBro Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

sydneyrobinson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sydneyrobinson/Figure_skating_at_the_Olympic_Games?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Figure skating at the Olympic Games

Evaluate the drafted changes
~Overall very well written. Everything is written in complete detail and effort. Every paragraph has a purpose within the article and makes sense when read together. The changes have worked to make the article more in depth and resourceful.