User:Sydnit2/Waist beads/Arw212 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydnit2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sydnit2/Waist beads


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Waist beads

Evaluate the drafted changes
The original article is short and only provides a slight look into what waist beads are. The Lead of the article is one of the areas that is usually supposed to be broad so you don't repeat things in the article too many times but the Lead could use a little more to it about what is to be expected in the article. The information already present in the article is relevant to the topic, but it just isn't much to read about it other than a brief summary of the waist beads in different cultures and the meaning behind different colors and materials of the beads. Adding more to the Leads, Origins, and Purpose would be a good way to go.