User:Sydnit2/Waist beads/Jasminefun4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydnit2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African dance


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I really liked how you did the article it was organized and had alot of information

Evaluate the drafted changes
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