User:Sydnit2/Waist beads/Wd234323 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydnit2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Waist beads


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additions you put in are nice and add in a new level of detail that fleshes out the article. I have no complaints about the articles as what you put into it only helped make it more complete than it was before.