User:Sydrgalloway/Transpersonal psychology

Instructor review:

''I encourage you to bring over more of the original article. This will allow the reviewers to see how your planned additions will fit in the context of the current article. Your additions read more like your explanations of your plans, as opposed to the planned edits you intend to make. I would revise to put in an alternate format. I suggest bringing over portions of the existing article and placing your planned edits within the existing text. Make sure to keep your additions in bold. This will make it easier to see what you plan to change. I would delete your article evaluation at this stage as well as the explanatory pieces in your sandbox. The citation included does appear to be an example of peer-reviewed secondary literature, but candidly, I am not familiar enough with the journal to speak about how reputable it is. I appreciate that your planned additions include Wiki links - nice work! I do encourage you to review the final assignment rubric to ensure you are completing all expectations for the assignment.''International Journal of Religion

I chose this source because of its expertise on world religions.

Integration of Sufism and Transpersonal Psychology

I chose this source because the researcher has studied this topic for more than forty years.

'''Other transpersonal disciplines, such as transpersonal anthropology and transpersonal business studies, are listed as transpersonal disciplines. Other fields of study that are related to transpersonal psychology, include near-death studies and parapsychology. '''

'''I added the reference from Integration of Sufism and Transpersonal Psychology because it refers to the fact that transpersonal psychology delves into niche psychology sectors, like near death experiences. This was discussed on page 1043.'''

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Transpersonal Psychology is a branch of psychology that focuses primarily on the shared human experience. It delves into parapsychology, near death experiences, and spirituality.