User:Sydrgalloway/Transpersonal psychology/Lmn23 Peer Review

General info
User:Sydrgalloway
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sydrgalloway/Transpersonal psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Transpersonal psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Transpersonal psychology is another topic that I had never heard of, so I really liked learning some more about it! The lead gives a definition of transpersonal psychology, but is lacking in terms of setting up the rest of the article. I would consider adding a few more background sentences and some information about the article sections. The tone of the article is neutral and provides information about the topic without sounding persuasive or biased. The content of the article is concise and well-written. The sections flow and are organized well. Despite this being a shorter article, there are many reliable sources from a variety of authors. There is a good balance between older sources and more up to date sources. There are no images, but I think the user could improve the article by adding some in the "History" or "Formative Period" sections. I think the user could greatly improve this article by adding to the lead and maybe discussing how transpersonal psychology is used in practice!