User:Sydrgalloway/Transpersonal psychology/Zclayt Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, I think that you have a really great start and foundation for your article. I also think that you have done a really great job throughout your article work as well. I was just suggest that you add more references to your references page as well as a bit more data from the article work. I think that your source were well mentioned and reliable and that the structure of your draft was great.

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Response to Peer Review:

Thank you for reviewing my Wiki article. Unfortunately, I fell behind and was struggling to keep up due to outside circumstances, so there wasn’t much to review from my end. Thank you for your recommendations, I will definitely add more data and I appreciate the feedback! My article will be updated and complete within the upcoming week, so if there are more peer reviews there will be something to check over. Thank you!