User:Sydrob20/Graffiti/CaitlynRCooper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydrob20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sydrob20/Graffiti


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Graffiti

Lead

 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? The lead does not seem to be updated, but the information in your sandbox looks like content that could be added to the lead.

Content

 * From doing other peer reviews, I've seen how others are organizing content within their sandboxes. Maybe add the headings for each section as a way to know where in the article it needs to go, as to make it easier whenever you move your content to the article.

Tone and Balance

 * Information added to the sandbox reads neutral and I would keep that same tone going forward in other parts of your article