User:Sydrob20/Graffiti/Roscoetherooster Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sydrob20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sydrob20/Graffiti?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Graffiti

Lead

 * The lead basically just has a description of what graffiti is.

Content

 * The content added is relevant, it tells us how graffiti was perceived in New York during the 70's
 * There could be more overall content added
 * It looks like there are no equity gaps, there is a lot of information on the graffiti wiki

Tone and Balance

 * One part does seem biased, at the end of the History section, he calls the graffiti, "amazing works", but other than that there was no more biases.

Sources and References

 * All sources look like they come from reliable sources.
 * Could have used at least one journal article.
 * All links work.

Images and Media

 * There are no images or media

Overall Impressions

 * Overall, the article additions look very good and show us some of the history of Graffiti.
 * Could have included more information.