User:SydtheSloth22/Melanie Harrison Okoro/CommodoreVe Peer Review

General info
Username: SydtheSloth22
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:SydtheSloth22/Melanie Harrison Okoro
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Melanie Harrison Okoro - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, this is a well written article about Dr. Okoro. The information that is provided is presented in a manner that is clear and concise. The tone is neutral, and the article is not biased. There are photos plus and information box for the subject and looks very polished at first glance.

The person seems to meet the requirements for notability, with numerous sources talking about Dr. Okoro. However the background information is that is provided was not cited. The article is well written, but there are no citations. The "Early Life and Education" and "Career and Research" sections contain no citations and halfway through the "Public engagement" sections is when the in-text citation is made.

Also, there is no lead section, the article goes straight into the "early life and education" section. Having a lead section would help introduce Dr. Okoro and strengthen the page.