User:SydtheSquid16/Derawar Fort/Alibshiz Peer Review

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Derawar Fort
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Overall, great job! A lot of great information was added to this page and it was fun to read about. My suggestions would include, in the history section a hyperlink would have been helpful when introducing the Indus Valley culture as well as the Hakra River and there are minor punctuation errors throughout article, i.e. fort being capitalized sometimes and sometimes not. I'm not sure if there is any additional pictures of the outside or any of the interior, but more pictures would have been a nice touch as well.