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Sacramento Police Department
=== 1. Everything in this article was relevant to the Sacramento Police Department, but the main topic is only one sentence and doesn't really give much information about them. The only part that goes into depth is the history, they do not tell us much about them. They only mention the first African American police officer sworn in. They could have given more information about the current police department because all we really know after reading that is their history in the past. 2.The article is neutral since there really isn't enough information for it to be bias towards anything. 3. The view points aren't really given, they just talk about how the department was created and it is pretty underrepresented because they don't give us current information. They also underrepresented the staff because they didn't tell us any valuable information about who works for them within the department. 4. The links to the citation do all work and they do support the information given but on the top of the page it says "This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations. This article needs additional citations for verification" so some of the citations may not be reliable. 5. The facts given have a reference but it doesn't look too reliable, most information is from random websites that are not popular sources but they are neutral. There isn't enough information that could be bias. 6. The information isn't talking about much that is relevant to today and they could've added more information about the police department and who works there, what famous cases they've worked on or arrests they have made. They are missing a lot of information that could give a reader an insight on what they are about. 7.The article has no discussion on the talk page. 8.The article has not received a rating. 9.Wikipedia doesn't really touch upon the officers who shot an unarmed black man, whereas the research essay went into depth about it and the cops. The page doesn't give any insight on the officers or any arrests they have attempted to make.==

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=== Edit 1: Possible areas I could work on in the Sacramento Police Department article is I could add more information about the big arrests they have made so people know what cases they have worked on and what they are famous for. If someone wants to see arrests they have made you can go on the website at https://www.policearrests.com/departments/CA/Sacramento/Sacramento-Police-Department/ and see the arrests the officers have made and cases they have worked on. I could also add a list of current officers and retired ones so people have information about the staff, even the ones who have been suspended because they are what make up the department. I can also improve this article by adding things about it that are relevant to today. They touch upon their history, but not current history so adding that in there would make the article more credible since a lot of important information is missing from it.=== == Edit 2 ==  ===In the article I am going to add specific places where the reader can go to get information about their contact information and current crimes they should look out for so the public can be aware of what is going on in the Sacramento Police Department. A lot of what is missing in the article can be found on their website, http://www.cityofsacramento.org/Police By contributing this, it is giving more information about the department but with direct links of where you can get this information, which can come in handy to someone doing research on them. Edit 3 == === Another edit that could be made is adding proper citations in for the information already there, it states that some of the citations aren't reliable and I would change that and find more reliable ones with proper facts ===

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"The Sacramento Police Department celebrated its 150th year anniversary and from the beginning to now, they are more diverse and ready to help and get to know their community"

" The Sacramento Police Department offers a variety of resources to assist the community in staying safe and informed. The following offer valuable information in a variety of areas.


 * Cops & Clergy
 * Crime Victim Resources
 * Domestic Violence
 * Drive Safe Sacramento
 * Emergency Services
 * Entertainment and Nightlife
 * Fee Schedule
 * Homeland Security
 * IMPACT Team
 * LGBT Liaison
 * Off-Highway Motor Vehicle Recreation
 * Sacramento Police Cares
 * Safety and Crime Prevention Tips
 * Start Smart Teen Driving Class
 * Suspect Description Form"

Their have been 16 deaths in total. Most fallen officers were lost due to gunfire, 9 officers died in gunfire, 1 officer died in an accidental gun firing.1 officer died of a heart attack, 2 officers died of a motorcycle accident, 1 officer died in a vehicular assault, and 2 officers died in a vehicular pursuit.