User:Sylvie Wav/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Kansyore Pottery)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(I am working on a literature review for a region where this (Kansyore) is the common long observed tradition at the available sites)

Evaluate the article
(The lead section is succinct and gives a general overview of pottery rather than focusing on the specific pottery type in question. Major sections of the article that may have given the reader background are not captured in the lead section. The information presented is pertinent, although it might be improved by consulting more recent works, which will also give more precise radiocarbon dates for the sites where Kansyore pottery has been recovered. Recent methodological and technological advancements like lipid residue analysis have not been captured and will be useful in understanding subsistence over time. The text is simple to read, has a neutral tone, and the links are functional. There are no images or conversations concerning this subject that will be useful to the reader. The article is part of a less explored wikimedia project called African archaeology.)