User:Sywarren/Women in Egypt/MathewLJohnson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Reviewing the work assigned to BatoolHMakki, Sywarren


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sywarren/Women_in_Egypt?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Women in Egypt

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article has plenty of potential to be very informative. I like the planned areas of interest and discussion and what you will be expanding on. There are a few typos and grammatical errors here and there, but those are an easy fix. I do like how you are approaching edits to the existing article; there are definitely content gaps to be filled. Your tone is also very good -- a nice neutral tone. Additionally, I looked through a few of your sources and found them very credible (they look good/reliable). Lastly, I know that you both are planning on working on the structure and format, so I won't say anything about that.

I look forward to seeing how these page edits turn out!