User:T01H98/Criminal psychology/MedLife4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

T01H98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:T01H98/Criminal psychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Criminal psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I can completely understand how reading the article and trying to look for what you can add can be a challenge, seeing as the article seems to be already well written. The draft you you provided did give a great overview of what the article is about in 1 to 2 sentences. Reading the article myself I can see the dilemma that you faced, though I might see where some improvements could be made in the article. Under the section "Psychology's role in the legal system" the title could be change to a A psychologist's role in the legal system or just Criminal Psychologist. As for what could be added under that section, possibly how to become a a criminal psychologist (e.g. degree, training). Under the "Profiling" section possibly adding, how when it was first introduce to the FBI the BAU was faced with skepticism, since it was considered a new science and not well known. And how it was for the FBI to depend on science to help them determine who the potential suspect could be and the suspects possible motives.

Thank you for your advise, I decided to add more for education and careers in criminal psychology.