User:T155Ram!!/Queerbaiting/Nishimag Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) I am reviewing T155Ram!!'s work.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:T155Ram!!/Queerbaiting&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Queerbaiting
 * Queerbaiting

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I checked the history of edits in this article and I could not find any edits by user T155Ram!!. But in the draft there is couple paragraphs of the definition of Queerbaiting and it looks exactly like the one in the article. The user has however added a credible source in the sandbox. And, you mentioned that you changed some grammar on the sentences, took out words and added LGBTQ+ instead of LGBT to add inclusion and modern language. These are all great edits but for next time make sure you hit publish to save all the edits/ works you did and give a little note on what you did. So that it will be save and come up in the edit history.

Now that you have added a new credible source and added couple more sentences to support the idea of reflection through representation, it has added some sort of relatable aspect in the article. I will definitely help connect with the readers.

Overall, Great edits.