User:TABaldwin/Hedy Lamarr/Agaudet09 Peer Review

General info
TABaldwin
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TABaldwin/Hedy Lamarr - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hedy Lamarr - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
First off, the added inclusions thus far seem to be fairly neutral. This suggests eliminating bias from their research. The information also seems to be properly cited as a footnote citation was involved. The one thing that was a little vague is in the second sentence is that in the second sentence it says, "it was suggested". My advice would be to clarify who exactly was suggestion the ideas presented and clarify the implications of those suggestions. Other than that, this contribution looks good! ￼