User:TCMcG/Jesus Torres/56ap12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TCMcG


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TCMcG/Jesus Torres
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jesús Torres
 * Jesús Torres

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- The Lead includes a clear introductory that describes the topic well. It is not too detailed, but contains enough information to introduce the topic, such as birth and death, occupation, and significant collaborations. It is nice that there are helpful Wikipedia links added, encouraging further research and understanding.

- In terns of content, "Early Life" is a good start to support the background information of the artist. I'm not sure what other contents the writer is going to add, but in my opinion, I think it would be nice to add some representative projects or works of the artist and more background information about the topic.

- Overall, tone is balanced well in neutral.

- All the sources are reliable—articles, historical newspaper from Flaxman Library, and reports—and added in proper places. They are all current sources and available to open directly.

- Since this is a new article, there are not enough contents yet to talk about sections. In future, it is a good idea to add a content list to view the plan of which contents to include. Grammars seems all good without any errors and existing contents are clear and concise to read easily.

- The image let the viewers have better understanding of the topic. It catches their eyes at the beginning of the article, which was a good choice to place.